This is another peer review specifically Tim Wils' really cool and interesting video essay!
Here is the link to it!
For this post I will be focusing more on form than content. Tim's video essay was overall very solid and I felt like he was very passionate by the topic which came through in the video. I also thought his introduction and concluding scenes and slides were very powerful, connecting the whole thing together.
Some suggestions:
1. Some of the music and clips were either fuzzy or cut off so it was sometimes hard to see them and understand what they were saying. I would suggest finding newer clips and making sure they are full ones so the audio quality is a lot better.
2. This one is minor, but I'm super big on making everything match and I feel like it would have been more powerful if the text was in maybe a comic book for with a solid color scheme to fully tie together all his points.
I used pages 70-73 for overall editing, making sure I was giving good feedback and pages 123-127 again for the video essay conventions and help
I hope these suggestions will help him out because I learned a lot from his video essay as well. I learned the importance of being passionate about your subject and making that come through to the audience because that may determine the power of the video essay.
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